Rereading the last 3 chapters of Summoned Summoner,
Also getting comments from friends,
yeah, it feels very compacted, full of information.
will need to rewrite everything OTL
SS 003
[8/1/2015] after getting feedback, too much information without much fluff, feels like documentary than a story. scrapping this, rewriting everything
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A new beginning
I lost consciousness after screaming.
When I woke up, I found myself in bed, facing an unfamiliar ceiling. Surrounded by people I do not recognise. I notice I can’t move much, I looked at my arms, it’s bandaged all over. Touching my face, I can feel my head bandaged over my forehead.
A beautiful woman came over, She was crying while holding me, saying “Praise Hisius”, over and over. My first words to her were: “Who are you?”. She stopped and stared at me blankly. Then hug me even tighter and cried hysterically. The men around her tried to console her, some even hold my hand and told me that I will get better. That look of pity, it hurts. Continue reading
A Summoned Summoner 002
[8/1/2015] after getting feedback, too much information without much fluff, feels like documentary than a story. scrapping this, rewriting everything
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Summoned (part 2)
I don’t know how long I’m here, all I can see is whiteness.
I can still hear the voice.
It was soft at first, when I try to find it, It got louder.
I see something, a magic circle? Getting bigger, closer.
I’m in front of the magic circle, the voice got louder, calling onto me.
…..heed my call…my champion….
A Summoned Summoner 001
[8/1/2015] after getting feedback, too much information without much fluff, feels like documentary than a story. scrapping this, rewriting everything
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Summoned (part 1)
It’s a clear sky today.
My life is fleeting before me.
I hear people around me clamoring, screaming, I hear the child cried loudly. My mind starts fading.
I’m see flashes of my memories, memories I rather forgotten.
News update
Well, it’s been 4 months since my last post. Really need to start posting my stories here soon.
Come on me! Finish up that draft !
A Summoned Summoner TOC
Title: A Summoned Summoner
Description:
He died saving a life, his soul summoned into another world. Thus begins an adventure of an unusual summoner who brandish the fist of justice.
Author’s Note:
Hi, This is my first story, trying out some ideas and writing styles. The writing style is greatly influenced by Japanese Isekai Light novels and Web Novels.
Prologue
Chapter 001 Summoned (part 1)
Chapter 002 Summoned (part 2)
Chapter 003 A new beginning
Chapter 004
Chapter 005
Chapter 006
Chapter 007
Chapter 008
Chapter 009
Hello world!
just started, let’s begin.
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